LOVEme-- star gazing?

Got a request. Made a total journal all about it. HOSHIAT. Okay, this is the outcome. Of three and a half hours, along with messing around with Paint Tool Sai, getting distracted, testing out new art styles, etc. OKAY. What do you guys think?

Um, not my OCs. The one on the left is Echo, a girl. The one on the right is Kaz, a boy.
OCs BELONG TO -- ~Raxil-Fluff

What do you guys think?
Total crap art?

Oh, and sorry Ruby. I got WAY too excited for my own good. Drew this, posted it, and totally forgot to send you it before. OH WELL.

Love, LONELY-HIME